sentence correcting

1.Lorraine moved to a new school. correct
2.Scared at first. Angie was scared at first.
3.It was hard to meet new people. Kristinas thought it was hard to meed new people.
4.Loraine's new lab partner,Janeese. Loraine's new lab partner's name was Janeese
5.Jeneese read an exciting book. correct
6.The name of the main character was Tracy. correct
7.This teenage character. This teenager character was playing bascketball.
8.Told Lorraine about the book. Rigo told Lorraine about the book.